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Figure Study 1

Published: Aug 25, 2013

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Working on an improvement project with =Eraili!
We've each made a list of five goals we want to tackle in our art so we can grow.
One of my goals is to improve with drawing/painting people, so expect to see more figure studies in the near future c:

Reference by *Tasastock: tasastock.deviantart.com/art/L…
Drawn in Paint Tool SAI
Please do not use in anyway, thank you~~

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Eraili

Sep 8, 2013

Okay, this is getting interested now, since I usually never critique people

I also know that I am really late to comment, I am so sorry _{_{I noticed this picture very late when I actually thought that we haven't started and then I was.. procrastinating ^^"}}

So.

At first- I like it xD

I like the colours you used and your way of painting it <3

You are paying attention to details and I even think that your hair do look better than the original xD

I do like the look on her face and the face itself, it just really is a human face and not something that doesn't look like it could be real, if you know what I mean xD

Maybe the nose is a bit too low, but I guess that just is taste xD

Hmm, I think her (from our side of view) left forearm (dictionary told me that should be the right word xD) is a bit too short, maybe it's also that her upper arms are too thick/long, I dunno what it is, but at least it seems to me ^^

I really do like her eyes and also the way you drew her hand and fingers, it really looks like she is holding her other arm up there x3

Yes... I hope that my critique is not insulting or anything >.<

If it is, then I am really sorry, I didn't mean it ^^"

I also hope that it is helpful (somehow ^^") even that I actually didn't have any advises or so D:

I'll try to make better critiques next time